The boardroom sentence that ruins every B2B farewell announcement
- May 6
- 6 min read
Ask.com almost got its goodbye right.
Warmth. Wit. A callback to Jeeves.
But then the first sentence buried all of it:
"As IAC continues to sharpen its focus, we have made the decision to discontinue our search business."
That sentence wasn't written for users.
It was written for the kind of people who nod at phrases like "sharpen its focus" in a boardroom. And it had no business opening a goodbye announcement.
A Brief History of a Search Engine Worth Saying Goodbye To
Ask.com launched in 1996 as Ask Jeeves, a search engine with a gimmick that turned out to be ahead of its time: you could type a question in plain English, and a cartoon butler named Jeeves would fetch you an answer. At its peak in the early 2000s, it was a genuine alternative to Google: popular enough that millions of people remember it not as a website, but as a childhood ritual. The butler. The clean search bar. The feeling that the internet was answering you.
But Google's dominance made it impossible for any second-tier search engine to compete on results quality, and Ask.com spent years repositioning, dropping Jeeves in 2006, pivoting to a Q&A format, and experimenting with different audience segments.
Parent company IAC kept it running but never found a viable path forward. By the time the shutdown came on May 1, 2026 (25 years after launch), the decision had been a long time coming.
But None of that needed to be in the announcement.
The Universal Reflex
When B2B companies communicate hard news, the instinct is almost universal: lead with the business logic. Explain the strategy. Justify the decision. Present it the way you'd present it to your board.
"After careful evaluation of our go-forward priorities..." "In order to better serve our core enterprise segment..." "As part of our continued investment in strategic focus areas..."
We've all read them. Every one of those sentences answers a question no one on the receiving end asked.
The customer didn't want to know why. They wanted to know that you understood what this meant for them.
The Default Template B2B Companies Reach For
Here's the structure most companies default to:
[OPEN WITH THE DECISION, FRAMED AS STRATEGY] Lead immediately with why this is good news for the company. Use words that mean nothing to the reader.
"As part of our ongoing commitment to [strategic priorities / delivering value / sharpening our focus], we have made the decision to [sunset / wind down / pivot away from] [product] effective [date]."
[JUSTIFY THE DECISION WITH BUSINESS LOGIC] Explain what the company is moving toward. Make it sound exciting. Do not acknowledge that the reader might be affected.
"This decision reflects our continued investment in [core platform / next-generation solutions / the future of X] and our focus on delivering [best-in-class / industry-leading / scalable] outcomes for our customers."
[ONE VAGUE SENTENCE ACKNOWLEDGING DISRUPTION] Technically address the impact, but keep it brief and passive. Do not say sorry.
"We understand this may require some adjustments on your end."
[THE PRACTICAL INFORMATION, BURIED IN THE THIRD PARAGRAPH] Put the dates, migration steps,
[Product] will be available until [date]
Customers should [action] before [date]
Please refer to [link to documentation no one will read]
Contact your account manager for assistance
[CLOSE WITH OPTIMISM ABOUT THE RELATIONSHIP] End by making it about the future, not the loss. Thank them for nothing specific.
"We remain committed to your success and look forward to continuing to support you on your journey. Thank you for your partnership."
[SIGN OFF FROM SOMEONE SENIOR ENOUGH TO SEEM IMPORTANT, NOT SENIOR ENOUGH TO BE ACCOUNTABLE] VP of Customer Experience / Chief Customer Officer / Head of Strategic Partnerships
What this template ticks:
Legal sign-off ✓
Board alignment ✓
Plausible deniability ✓
Not being quoted out of context ✓
The reader understands what's happening ✗
The reader is treated like a human ✗
Why This Is Psychologically Backwards
There's a well-documented phenomenon in persuasion research: when people feel unacknowledged, they become resistant, even to information that would otherwise help them.
The rational content you've carefully structured doesn't land, because you've signalled in the first sentence that you're not talking to them. You're talking past them.
Leading with the human moment isn't a writing trick. It's a trust mechanism. It tells the reader: we know this affects you, and we're starting there.
The failure mode has a name: writing for the paper trail
Every announcement gets drafted in layers — legal, communications, leadership. Somewhere in that process, a sentence from the board version makes it through uncut.
It happens because from inside the building, "sharpen our focus" sounds perfectly normal. Everyone in the room has been using that phrase for weeks.
Ask.com's notice had genuine warmth in it, the tribute to the engineers who built the product, the closing callback to Jeeves, the headline that understood the moment. The bones were there. But that one boardroom sentence in the opening undoes any goodwill, and the whole tone collapses before it has a chance to connect with the audience.
The Fix: Understand Whose Moment This Is
The principle is simple:
The rationale belongs to you.
The goodbye belongs to them.
Your customers don't need to know why this is happening. They need to feel that the people behind the decision understood what it means for them.
Explanations go in the press release, the investor update, the FAQ. What goes in the announcement itself is the acknowledgment.
Name the feeling before you name the fact.
What Ask.com Should Have Opened With (It Was There All Along)
I see this happen with so many of my clients' messages, where the closing lines of their announcement say almost everything the opening needs to say. And all they need to do is move it.
"To the millions who asked. After 25 years, Ask.com is officially closing on May 1. We are deeply grateful to the brilliant engineers, designers, and teams who built and supported Ask over the decades. And to you, the millions of users who turned to us for answers in a rapidly changing world--thank you for your endless curiosity, your loyalty, and your trust. Jeeves' spirit endures."
The Template That Works
The structure below works whether you're sunsetting a product, ending a contract, changing pricing, or communicating a service disruption. The sequencing is the same every time.
[OPENING — Lead with the human moment, not the decision]
Open on a shared experience, or a recognition of what's at stake. One to three sentences. No corporate language. Use your audience's words, not yours.
Acknowledge what this thing meant to the users - the real people affected.
"To everyone who built their workflow around this..."
"You trusted us with something important."
"To those who we kept warm"
"For X years, [product/service] has been how [audience] [did the thing that mattered to them]."
[THE NEWS — Say it plainly, in one sentence] Concrete, plain, unambiguous. Don't soften it with passive voice. Don't bury it.
"[Product] will be discontinued on [date]."
Nothing more.
"[Product] will be discontinued on [date]."
"On [date], we're closing/ending/discontinuing [product]."
[WHAT HAPPENS NEXT — The practical stuff, no jargon] What does the affected person actually need to know and do? Lead with their action, not yours.
What stops working, and when
What they need to do (export data, migrate, cancel)
What you're doing to make it easier
Who to contact if they need help
[THE WHY — Here's where the logic goes] Not at the top. Here. Once you've acknowledged the person and told them what they need to know, you've earned the right to explain the decision.
"This wasn't an easy call. Here's the honest reason: [one clear sentence]. [One sentence on what this means for where the company is going — but only if it's genuinely relevant to the reader, not just reassuring to the board.]"
[THE CLOSE — End like a human, not a press release] Not "thank you for your support." Thank them for the real thing.
"Thank you for [the specific thing: the questions you asked, the trust you put in us, the years you spent here]. It mattered."
End on something the reader can hold onto. A next step, a commitment, a quiet grace note."We're here to help you through the transition."
The rules underneath this:
The business logic is not the lede. It never is.
Passive voice is almost always a sign you're hiding from the decision. Own it.
"Sharpen our focus," "strategic priorities," and "evolving landscape" are placeholders for an explanation, not explanations.
If legal needs a sentence, put it at the bottom. Not the top.
Read it as the person receiving it. If sentence one would make you feel like a number, rewrite it.
The Companies That Get This Right Have a Real Advantage
The way you communicate endings tells customers more about your character than the way you communicate wins. Anyone can write a good launch announcement. Not everyone can write a good goodbye.
When a customer receives difficult news and feels genuinely seen in it, they often become advocates because you respected them enough to be transparent, and lead with the acknowledgment. Those are the things people remember and repeat.
That difference almost always comes down to your first paragraph:
Ask, did we write this for us, or for them?
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