Take your copy from ‘blah…’ to ‘Wow you read my mind and I can't wait to work with you........ "
Key Communication and Copy Review: tailored feedback and recommendations
You've dotted every i - crossed every t, and just about to publish your landing page only to get to a point where you find yourself staring at your website thinking:
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"Will this work?"
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It can be frustrating - even the most skillful writers find themselves second-guessing their words. Your writing needs to attract and appeal to your customers.
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Whether it’s your home page, about page or sales landing page:
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Is it clear to your audience what you're offering?
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Do they know what you want them to do next?
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Is your core message clear and simple to understand?
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Does the top/hero section of your homepage answer what you do, who your products/services are for, and how they can benefit them?
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Does it include all the elements needed to maximise conversions, from pain point agitation to tackling your audience’s most common concerns?
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Is your tone of voice consistent?
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Is your copy easy to read?
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Does it include an impactful and unmissable call to action?
My Key Copy Review is a complete audit of your copy tailored to your business with suggested re-writes for conversion.
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I'll read your copy and research your business and you'll receive my honest recommendations to ensure your copy matches your customer's buying journey:
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How does it work?
There are only 8 spots available each month offered on a first come, first served basis.
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To book your Key Copy Review fill out the form and answer the questionnaire with your payment.
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Tell me all the details about your business and your audience so I know who you’re trying to reach and what you want to do.
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You can email me your content or send me the link to the page
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I’ll review up to 1500 words
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You’ll get a detailed report:
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Your content with my notes on the page - your strengths and any weak spots (including specific rewrite suggestions)
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A Summary of Communication Design, layout that creates a sales funnel
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Post Review You can contact me with your questions I’ll get back to you within 48 hours
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I offer a full refund for any review that only needs 3 or less small changes.
What’s NOT part of a Key Copy Review?
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The main goal of a copy review, is to deal with how you communicate your business to your audience.
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Not a full rewrite. The Key Copy Review is about helping you use what you already have and giving you recommendations that will best help you attract clients and get them to take action
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No Technical/SEO. This Review does not cover the technical side ie: website speed, Schema markup, keywords, SEO ranking higher etc
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This is not a proofreading service (although I can't help but circle any mistakes)
What can you submit in a Copy Review?
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Landing pages / Sales pages
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Email newsletter
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Home page
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About page
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Up to 1500 Words
Is a Copy Review the best option for my business?​
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Before you book your Copy Review I want you to have a little think about whether this is the best option for your business.
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If your current copy hasn’t been bringing you the results you were hoping for, you may be better off with a brand new copy written from scratch. You can book a consultation for a Landing Page here​
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What’s more, If you book a 1-1 Consultation with me you will get a full audit as part of my services.
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Personally, my consultations are the best value, but the Intensive Copy Review is great if you're on a tight deadline to launch and need quick fixes that will bring in results.
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Get an honest review with 3+ recommendations or your review is free
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BUT if you just need a second opinion then a review is a great first step
WHAT HAPPY CLIENTS SAY
Maya
Founder Deep Routes
USA
We needed help copyediting the narrative and technique descriptions for a forthcoming first-of-its-kind Afro-Indigenous-centered culinary curriculum that provides in-depth learning materials, lesson plans, and other curriculum materials that are easily accessible to educators online and encourage adaptation.
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Because there are so many components we needed a lot of help with making sure the copy was absolutely flawless.
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Such a great experience working with Vivien!
She's responsive, thorough, and really supportive throughout the whole process. Highly recommend!
Danny K
Chairman, NATAN International
Humanitarian
Israel
We needed fresh eyes and remarkable writing capabilities for our future newsletter. We needed an updated journalistic style, short, attractive, and punchy.
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I was impressed by your professionalism, quick answering, and creativity and will appreciate continuing to be listed with your tips and newsletters.
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I am sure that we will find a way to continue our collaboration.
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Thank you so much for your help
Jules S
Executive Director
California, USA
We needed to be able to clearly communicate what we are building to potential donors and funders. I needed to be concise and have the best trailer possible that would get these folks to buy and support our mission.
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I cannot say enough that it was an absolutely WONDERFUL experience working with Vivien.
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She helped me refine my pitch for my org and abbreviate my why for founding the org.
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Vivien is thoughtful, insightful, and has great ideas. I highly recommend working with Vivien.